life how it goes

Wednesday, October 11, 2006

well what can i say i am 19 now i have had a life that i really don't understand but i made it in many ways that i thaught i would not make it a all......................... wow

4 Comments:

  • At 10:49 AM, Blogger TeachUCF said…

    This is the teacher in me coming out, Korey. Use upper and lower case when you type a sentence. It is much easier to read.

    What kind of life? What has been happening to you. Why did you not think you would make it? What has changed? Help your reader to understand what is going on in your life before and since diagnosis.

    You have a lot to share with people your age, but you need to tell them something. Go back and start from the beginning. Use significant milestones in your life to break up your blog.

    Don't put everything that has happened to you in one blog. Give each blog a title which tells the reader what you are concentrating on in that blog.

    Talk about your life as a 19 year old, in Africa, so that people in other countries can understand what you are going through.

    I look forward to reading your future blogs.

     
  • At 10:53 AM, Blogger TeachUCF said…

    Just realized you are not in Africa, but in Guyana, South America. Sorry about that.

     
  • At 11:36 AM, Blogger Jessica Gilliam said…

    I am looking forward to reading your posts. I think it would be nice to have a point of view from someone in another country.

     
  • At 8:05 AM, Blogger Cindy G said…

    Korey, how has HIV/AIDS affected you and your region? Do you have friends or family members battling this disease?

     

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